Saturday, 3 January 2009

"Naomi" or "She Out Of My League"

for the first time in my life i have written a song, in which the lyrics i actually like. and for that matter i waish to share them with u. tho im dont know wat to call the song. im stuck between "shes out of my league" or to name it after the girl who inspired the song "naomi" but yes here are the lyrics, dont know wat the presentation is gunna look like but still.

She has the looks of a model, and the pictures to prove it.
Partys most night, so she knows hows to move it.
Lets her hair down, she definately knows how to lose it.
With loads of guys around her, bet she knows how to do it.

But what does that matter, how does it help me.
As an on looker, will she ever here my plee.
Wanting to ask her out, maybe go get some coffee.
Or even expand, and go see a movie.

But why would she care, i'm not even her type.
I've written this song, instead of having a good fight.
It's like giving her red wine, wen you know she likes white.
It's that kind of situation, i have no right.

So the way she moves her hips, its always a big tease.
And spending time with her, would just clearly please.
But its such a shame, i know that it cant be.
As i've come to the conclusion, that shes out of my league.

(then finish of with some "la la la"s)

i am thining of putting a chorus in, but for once i dont know how to get into one.

oh and lesley if uve read this, ive posted this at 11:45am, theres a funny timeing system lol

1 comment:

Jimbob said...

Wow, that actually was quite good :)

Keep up the good work, my friend XD